冗言贅字版:
Mary is such an adorable girl who always does her best in everything she could do. Mary likes to draw and Mary likes to sing. Despite being just 8-years old, Mary can play the piano very well and Mary can also the guitar well enough. At Mary』s school, Mary has a lot of friends because Mary is very friendly. Mary』s teacher always considers Mary as the role model in the class.
(中文也冗…)Mary是一個可愛的女孩，她總是竭盡所能地做任何事。Mary喜歡畫畫，瑪麗喜歡唱歌。儘管只有 8 歲，Mary 的鋼琴彈得很好，Mary 的吉他彈也不錯。在Mary的學校，Mary有很多朋友，因為Mary非常友好。Mary的老師總是把Mary當成班上的榜樣。
使用代名詞she/her來取代Mary ，讓這段文章讀起來較自然：
Mary is such an adorable girl who always does her best in everything she could do. She likes to draw and sing. Despite being just 8-years old, Mary plays the piano very well, and she also plays the guitar well enough. At her school, she has a lot of friends because she is very friendly. Her teacher always considers her as a role model in the class.
(雖然「她」也是過多需要再調整，但讀起來還是比上面的通順多了)Mary是一個可愛的女孩，總是竭盡所能地做任何事。她喜歡畫畫和唱歌。儘管Mary只有 8 歲，但她鋼琴彈得非常好，她的吉他也彈得很好。在她的學校，她有很多朋友，因為她非常友好。她的老師一直認為她是班上的榜樣。